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Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Not Em on Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:03 pm

Jake Efron thought he was invincible. Now he's met his match....


The Steam Dragon has been Jake Efron's pride and joy for three years. Running on little steam due to the giant sail, it is one of the more silent steam vessels out there. It's fast, however- Efron can effortlessly rescue anyone attacked by the dreaded pirates that have been growing in number. A small ship, it is easily crewed. Only his 3 most trusted friends have ever set foot on it and lived- his girlfriend Shelly Sinlue, the bets pilot he's ever known Samuel Jones Copwater, and his technicion Jimmy Stewart. The four of them scour the world, saving being who need saving. Untill now.




The Moaning Star has a long tale. Originally the secret progect of SMH, it was to be Johnathon Scarlett's flagship. He sent his men to hire the best workers around. Nathan Leg, a wealthy Russian inventor, was hired to design a new system that would easily power the entire vessel. Oliver Kryft and Baron Von Larrry- though they wouldn't meet until years later- were hired to help build the vessel. When the shipyard was attacke dby the evil Dr. Maybe, he still the ship and took it as his own. Kryft would see the brunt of the fall back, for he had placed everything he owned on a bet that he'd finish the ship. However, he managed to find a low paying job at the local hotel. The four, ironically enough, would all meet face to face a few years later during the Uprising Against the Government



The Moaning Star was not even supposed to be it's true name. It was a typo accidently caused by Nathan Leg apun naming ship. But Dr. Maybe liked the name, and kept it. He loaded it with weapons, which would engulf the ship with steam eventually. Leg's power generater- a bike with massive pipes to the crucial areas of the ship- was operated by Dr. Maybe's steam cyborg, The Machine. The rest Dr. Maybe and his mechanical arms took care of by himself. No one escaped the Moaning Star alive. His targets seemed to be picked by a staage head on top of the ship. It always seemed to pick to the next ship to be devasted by his wrath, almost as if to signal to the crew 'it's a trap.'





One day the Moaning Star and Steam Dragon met head on. Dr. Maybe has one goal.

Kill Jake Efron, his arch enemy.



The Charecter:

Jake Efron

Shely Sinlue

Jimmy Stewart and Samuel Jones Copriter

Dr. Maybe

The Machine


And that's it! IMO, I did good for my first STeampunk MOC Razz

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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Johnnyred on Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:13 pm

LOL! Man, this is epix! Especially the Moaning Star, but the best thing is the back story! I love how you tied it into the RPG! Razz

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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by BrickCaptain on Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:16 pm

I like how you incorporated the Steampunk RPG into the storyline.
Grr, Johnnyred beat me to it! Razz
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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Rox on Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:34 pm

This is absolutely AWESOME!

You did an excellent work on the story and ships! Razz

Also, I like my brother's mustache. Razz
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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by The Cracken on Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:37 pm

This is excellent! I love all the steam-pipes and stuff everywhere! And the backstory: ROFL!

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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Fluffy on Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:53 pm

Well Leg, far be it from me to with hold praise when it is due. Very nice MOC and story! I see you included a pillow. That makes your pics EVEN BETTAH IMO! Razz


Wait just a minute.....


She's blonde.

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Razz






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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Doctor Who on Wed Jul 27, 2011 8:49 pm

That's awesome!! Very Happy

Due to me not being in the RPG's here, I don't know the story behind your story. Razz

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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Humboldt Hitchhiker on Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:00 am

Apparently I'm a high stakes gambler. Blarg. Razz

But good show! The story was fun. I like all the machinery stuff attached to the Moaning Star. Looks very nice.
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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Moe Howahd on Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:19 am

Noyce. I luuuuuuuv the way you tied it into the RPG. Laughing

I like "The Machine" (Dun dun duuuuhhh....) I like Jake too. Where'd you get that gun thing?

The Moaningstar is good. I like it... Razz
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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Not Em on Thu Jul 28, 2011 11:31 am

Thanks for all the comments Very Happy

Jake's Gun comes from the Hazmat guy in the minifigure line.

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Re: Steam Battle (Contest Entry)

Post by Humboldt Hitchhiker on Thu Jul 28, 2011 1:34 pm

I was wondering where that came from. Thank you for preemptively answering that. Razz
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